(another 200-word story.)
Good party. Good, good party. Shit everywhere. Cigarette butts, beer cans, everyone out cold.
Thirsty. So, so thirsty. No spit thirsty. Need something to drink, just a sip.
Get something then.
Get something, then dip out! Oh, yeah—thanks, Rybo. Thanks for the party. Good, good party.
Over there, next to the sleeping bag, next to Rybo. A bottle of Coke or Pepsi or whatever—over there is a cold drink, get it.
Probably warm…yeah, no thanks…
Whatever! Thirsty! So, so thirsty! No spit thirsty! Need a sip!
Watch out—butts everywhere, and probably shit. What a party. What. A. Party. Thanks, Rybo. Thanks for—oh! Sleeping bag—sorry, sorry.
Yeah, yeah…Whatever, Party Cans. Just get the bottle and get the shit out of there.
Need a bag for the cans, Rybo, and a bag for the shit everywhere. Sorry, Rybo, and thanks…
Out cold. Sleeping.
Whatever then. There is the bottle. Get a sip and get out…
What the shit?
What is it? The bottle, what is it?
Dip spit is what!
Yeah. Dip spit.
So thanks, Everyone. Just thanks.
If you read my last story, “Field Trip.” then you know what I’m up to with this…
If you decide to give this exercise a try yourself (which I hope you do), you are welcome to post a link to your story in the comments!
Thank you for taking the time to read my 200-word story! Would love to know whether or not it hit the spot.
Welp, it’s back to the kitchen to cook up some longer short stories. Those take a while to marinate, so it may be a minute before you hear from me.
Until we meat again,
My 50 words were: good, party, shit, everywhere, cigarette, butts, beer, cans everyone, out, cold, thirsty, so, no, spit, need, something, to, drink, just, a, sip, get, then, dip, oh, and, thanks, for, the, Rybo, there, over, next, sleeping, bag, yeah, bottle, of, Coke, or, Pepsi, probably, warm, whatever, watch, is, it, what, sorry.