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Matt Andersen's avatar

This is such a gripping story! And telling it through these two personalities is such a smart and effective way to do it. It eliminates the risk of using thought verbs, so all that action and description is forced onto the reader to experience themself. It pulls (polls?) the reader straight into it.

Really great. You set a high bar for the rest of us!

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Benjamin Allen's avatar

This is probably the most original story I've ever read. The humour is brilliant, I'm hooked to what's happening, the polls are a genius touch.

Awesome stuff, Maegan.

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