I know, right? I had this line I took out, right after "I am the yelling type of mother turns out." It used to say, "Like my mother and her mother and the mother before her." But I thought maybe it was too obvious.
I was thinking I need to read more Bender also. They need a book of Keret, Bender, Saunders, Evenson, Barthelememememew that I can alternate between all in the same document.
I love how, particularly at the start, the words seem like song lyrics. Kind of grotesque but beautiful? If that makes sense. Excellent work as always!
Thank you, Michelle, I think I will. Originally it went a bit further but I could never finish it, and a friend said, it could end right where it is. And I looked again and thought, hmm, maybe. But really I keep going back and forth and your comment is the oomph I need to do it. Thank you :)
Thanks John, I like that perspective, ha! I used to love that show. A decade ago I had a website, thecryptkeepersdaughter.com when I was trying to first get out there lol
This could be longer and still enjoyable!
i know, it doesn't feel done, does it?
What would Aimee Bender say?
More “I don’t want to be my mother” moments preceding the end, maybe?
I know, right? I had this line I took out, right after "I am the yelling type of mother turns out." It used to say, "Like my mother and her mother and the mother before her." But I thought maybe it was too obvious.
I was thinking I need to read more Bender also. They need a book of Keret, Bender, Saunders, Evenson, Barthelememememew that I can alternate between all in the same document.
Everytime I do a post I lose like 10 subscribers. 😂
I'm in awe at your imagination and way of putting it into words. I don't know how you do it.
Thank you, Kris, you're too kind. xo
Just spitting facts. x
I love how, particularly at the start, the words seem like song lyrics. Kind of grotesque but beautiful? If that makes sense. Excellent work as always!
Thank you, Matt. 🥩
Now that’s how you write a first sentence!
Ha, thanks, Matt, I appreciate it! 🥩
Maegan, I died 🤣 keep going. I want more.
Thank you, Michelle, I think I will. Originally it went a bit further but I could never finish it, and a friend said, it could end right where it is. And I looked again and thought, hmm, maybe. But really I keep going back and forth and your comment is the oomph I need to do it. Thank you :)
This reminds me of an old episode of Tales From the Crypt. Well done.
Thanks John, I like that perspective, ha! I used to love that show. A decade ago I had a website, thecryptkeepersdaughter.com when I was trying to first get out there lol
Remember the vignette where the guy had an evil 2nd head growing out of his body? (It may not have been TFTC, Im not sure.)
Yes that does ring a bell 🤣 🤣
https://youtu.be/yJjDVr03FJE?si=rgAlUm1NTr8myhvJ
yessssssssssss🥩🥩🥩🥩🥩🥩🥩🥩🥩🥩🥩
Loved it!
Thank you, C! 🥩
I will never see a hangnail the same way again! I know it’s gonna be a wild ride and you never disappoint!
Ha! Thank you, Susan! 🥩🥩
Well now I want to know who resides on the rest of her digits. Loved it!
Thanks, Tom!! 🥩