Really enjoyed this poem. Love how you wrote about drinking and discarding a water bottle like you were describing a toxic relationship with a person who constantly drains you of energy. He was probably cheating with a Gatorade anyways. That bastard!
Really enjoyed this poem. Love how you wrote about drinking and discarding a water bottle like you were describing a toxic relationship with a person who constantly drains you of energy. He was probably cheating with a Gatorade anyways. That bastard!
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Beautifully designed and executed, Maegen. Has me thinking about a few bottle/soul crushers of my own.
Fuck 'em. 💜
You rock. Hope you're surviving summer vacation. 🥂
Fun concept and well executed! Poetry is deceptively fun.
I, too, have encountered the dasani bottles of the world. Beautifully done.
Bravo! I really enjoyed this piece, Maegan.
Wickedly clever!
All about perspective.
Great stuff, Maegan.
I mean, at least Dasani’s got some crumpled company
Bravo Maegan! I like how he sucks...WINK
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I enjoyed this. Layout of poem was inventive and clever. thanks.
The feeling you create with the bottle (of water slowly running out) was excellent. Great work!
Nice!
I don’t read a lot of poetry but I deeply enjoyed the cleverness of this
Clever!
Love me some good poetry. Thanks for this, really cool!