33 Comments
Jul 29Liked by Maegan Heil

Really enjoyed this poem. Love how you wrote about drinking and discarding a water bottle like you were describing a toxic relationship with a person who constantly drains you of energy. He was probably cheating with a Gatorade anyways. That bastard!

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Beautifully designed and executed, Maegen. Has me thinking about a few bottle/soul crushers of my own.

Fuck 'em. πŸ’œ

You rock. Hope you're surviving summer vacation. πŸ₯‚

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Fun concept and well executed! Poetry is deceptively fun.

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I, too, have encountered the dasani bottles of the world. Beautifully done.

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Bravo! I really enjoyed this piece, Maegan.

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Wickedly clever!

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All about perspective.

Great stuff, Maegan.

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I mean, at least Dasani’s got some crumpled company

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Bravo Maegan! I like how he sucks...WINK

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I enjoyed this. Layout of poem was inventive and clever. thanks.

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Aug 3Liked by Maegan Heil

The feeling you create with the bottle (of water slowly running out) was excellent. Great work!

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Nice!

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